向左走的我

翻閱舊文，發現我真的很愛數學式的空間描述。

嗯,終於把msn space的東西也搬過來了

所以我在朔日開始不依靠你的生活，

在望日發洩寂寞的苦楚。

當點連成線，行走於上，隱約見到的，是否是我所屬的平面?

我在陌生車站大廳裡的寄物櫃存放了被遺忘的東西。

遺失了鑰匙，也搆不著的27號櫃。

他與我擦身而過，對望。
我想問他在天堂還好嗎? 能否幫我拿下存放的物品。
卻只能默默前行。或許，該遺忘的就讓它留在那裡。
拿不到的也無須牽掛。

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NG婆婆和肯園的貨到手了，

可是我沒有因為花了大把銀子變成達人。

在家裡翻閱著香氣與空間，缺乏感受力的麻瓜只能從貧瘠的腦袋裡努力想像。

或許還是得乖乖回頭買基礎書打底子>"

所以沒辦法開車回去看小貓。

細胞活得不開心，我也活得很爛。

夢到不喜歡的同學跟我討論彩油，是否暗示我喜歡不喜歡一個人跟他跟我的共通點沒有差距?

那麼多年了，為什麼老是夢到這個人?

八百年沒寫部落格，然後連無名以後發現不屬於我的文章。

嗯，終於被砍帳號了。

還是沒什麼勁寫東西，這裡有些許備分大概可以稍感安慰吧。

流浪多年，搬家數次，每次都會割捨一些東西，

從無名個版流落到批兔，砍了一堆私密不想記起的東西，而現在所謂去蕪存菁留下的部落格文章又被砍殺大半，

或許沒有什麼去蕪存菁，過去的也就過去了。

一直試圖找尋價值觀的立足點，卻再次發現我無論如何找不到一個真的覺得客觀的位置。

想要用更寬廣的態度去看待事物，卻在別人的觀念被我認為不夠寬廣的時候心生厭惡。

如果我追求的是寬廣，卻忽略了別人有選擇尺度的自由。而別人的選擇尺度，卻又與我的價值觀衝突。於是發現自己存在是空間中的一點，從x,y平面上看到的我與某些人重疊，可是在y,z平面中卻距離遙遠。而我跟其他的點，能有多少相似的部分？而多近的距離才是我可以接受的範圍?